“You’re calling this a setback?”
“Temporary. Look, you know how these guys can be.”
“Who, Neil? The IRS? Or the fucking DEA? And no, I don’t know how they can be.”
“Like you never chiseled anything in your life.”
“Jesus. That’s your approach? Blaming me for this fucking train wreck?”
“I’m not blaming you. It’s my fault.”
“Obviously. You’re the one with the subpoena.”
“I really need your help, Jules.”
“My help. Jesus. You’re really something, you know? It’s galling.”
“My back’s to the wall. I’ve nowhere else to turn.”
“You need to work on your persuasion skills.”
“So, yes?”
Great dialogue. Something tells me he’s going to keep talking until Jules says yes.
Nice characterization through a very dynamic dialog.
I really like stories told only through dialogue. It’s not easy to do, but you’ve pulled it off – good stuff.
If Jules is his only hope I think he is in trouble.