It’ll be fun. You can see the planets.
Bullshit. I didn’t come to Hawaii to look at fucking planets. How about learning to surf? How about getting laid?
And then I see the snow. I can’t believe my eyes. Snow? In Hawaii?
In the front seat they sit chattering away about how pretty it is.
“You may not give a shit, but I am wearing flip flops.”
Mom turns in her seat. “Randy, I told you. It’s on a mountain.”
“Observatories are usually on mountains, Randy,” smirks Dad.
I swear, I am going to push him over the fucking railing.
Love this! Made me laugh out loud!
Yep! I laughed out loud too. Nice one!
Ah, poor soul! I, on the other hand, would enjoy snow in Hawaii. 😀
Having raised two boys, I can well imagine this scene having played out in one of their heads. I hope neither really wanted to push me over the railing though. Ha ha
Fun read.
I’m with the kid. Who expected snow in Hawaii.
I’m waxing down the surfboard – and get ready for the pineapples.
randy
That’s gonna be a fun walking up a mountain in flip flops. Somehow I don’t think this guy is going to care about that. Funny story. Nice one!
This captures your character’s age and attitude perfectly. Your construction adds to the effect. Good job.
Unsuitable footwear – the worst sin you could commit in my hiking obsessed family.
Very believable characters – I know this lot of old!
Brilliant. I loved this 🙂 Brilliantly written!
Flip flops six sizes too big = snowshoes. Great idea Randy!
I love this. And I’m with the kid, who expects snow in Hawaii… I only learned through the Friday Fictioneers that Hawaii has five climate zones. In any case, great story.
Hawaii has five climate zones? I didn’t know that either. Well, your story is clever and well written! Good job! Nan
Love it ! Fantastic piece and so funny. I’m with the kid I don’t think of snow when I hear Hawaii 🙂
Yeah. Couldn’t go to one of the volcanoes because the road was snow-covered. Bummer. Had to stay on the beaches… Great story!
This one made me laugh! Loved it!
F****** good read! Love it!
Rosey Pinkerton