Honestly? That witch woman near scared hell out me, what with the smoke and the beads and all that hoodoo chanting.
They say you pay you money and you takes your choice, but I’d be lying if I said I didn’t think about running out of that room right then and there.
D’Angelo said she’d need some of my blood to seal the deal, so I expected that part, but all the rest of it fair turned my stomach.
I swear, the only reason I went through with it was the fear she’d come after me if I backed out.
This is a little story within a larger story. Great take.
Run!
Nicely done, I would have my doubts too.
Oh my. I wonder what “the rest of it” turned out to be. Or maybe I don’t want to know. Good job.
Shouldn’t have messed with voodoo in the first place!
Nightmares will be had for weeks!
– Lisa
Interesting. It would make a good lead in for a larger story, methinks. 🙂 <3
Ohhh! I want more, what other stuff? Well written, I could feel his nervousness.
Yes, this does seem to be the start of a larger story. Intriguing. Well done.