Look, she said she wanted to. It’s not like I made her. Things just got out of hand, that’s all.
Maybe I handled it bad. Sure. I admit it. I ain’t perfect. I never meant to hurt her. Honest. I just wanted her to quit hollering. And then, like I said, it got out of hand.
It was over before I knew it. Seeing her lying there like she was just sleeping made me sad. I had hoped so much this would be perfect. Then she had to go and ruin everything by hollering.
But they won’t never find nothing.
Hmmmm…
Nothing ever stays hidden forever.
Talking to himself ?, or did he have a partner in crime.
Disturbing, tragic stuff. A great voice you’ve given your character, too 🙂
What is it about this cabin that brings so much violence this week? I did it too, so not judging, just curious.
Dark!
Nice piece. Like the others, I enjoyed the characters voice. You do that very well.
This leaves me wanting to know what happened to the victim. Was this a dare between friends? Great story!
Good write.
An authentic-feeling glimpse into the mind of a killer. You do come up with the stuff, Randy. 😉
He’s a creepy one. This is a disturbing read – I can hear him talking, believing he was justified in doing what he’s done. Great character building.